The Necklace Preview

So this is a preview to my new story I am working on, set in Germany WWII. Comment and lemme know if you like it!

Darkness. Cold. Terror.
That's what I felt huddling next to my mother and little sister. This horrible fear never left me, all because of my religion. I am Jewish, and that means I am used to people hating me, sneering at me on the streets, spitting at me. It eats me away inside, but I had to learn to look over it and ignore them.
"Annie, please bring your necklace." "Why?" "We must burn it," "NO!"
And because I refused to burn my necklace, we are now underground listening to the sound of the solidiers overhead. It is all my fault, and its all because of a star necklace.

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